Pikes Peak at Dusk

By silverlin

One cloud in the midsummer west blazes

in the dusk above the silhouette of hills.

The dome of Pikes Peak at the northern end

of the softened skyline surprises me.

It is not now the awesome snowcapped giant

that catches first light

and lifts the heart as well as eye

on winter mornings.

Nor does it seem close as Pike thought it was

when he decided, twenty miles

and two centuries from here,

that the summit was a short walk away.

I know that darkening knob

is a long day’s climb on a good trail that

starts two days march from Pike’s departure point

Greenhorn marks the southern end

of this apparent range gentled by dusk.

The hills seem to drop away

from both sides to the very river

Pike was supposed to be following.

There is no hint, from here, of the great gorge

cut narrow and a thousand feet deep

through solid rock by that river

crashing now with spring melt.

It is quiet here. The world seems to slip

into a promised evening peace.

I know the mountain and river

will rise again next morning.

Jeff Arnold

2 Responses to “Pikes Peak at Dusk”

  1. jerry miller Says:

    Jeff,

    I love this poem about places you and I know so well (you more than me). I have never climbed Pikes Peak, but for the first 19 years of my life I could see it from a room in my parents’ home. I took it for granted then. Then, for 23 years in the middle of my life I see could see it much closer from the front window of my own home in CS. I marveled then at how it seemed to be different every day. You have seen it close up, and your vision of the mountain and the river I also know is lovely.

  2. MJ Huckleberry Says:

    Jeff –

    Perhaps now the only visits I shall make to Pikes Peak will be when I feel a familiarity you who have adored her through personal contact share with those of us less fortunate.

    I remember wishing fervently, as a young teen, that someone would take pity on me and invite me to accompany them on a ‘hill climb’ to the top of that glorious mountain. I’ve let time pass too swiftly to hold close hope that it will still happen.

    I long to view her purple mountain majesty with that same fervor whenever I hear Katharine Lee Bates’ cherished poem that came to her as she sat on top of the Peak – America the Beautiful. What a view she must have witnessed to have been so besotted with verse!

    Even having never seen the Peak from the top, I believe with certainty that the connection one feels while listening to Ms. Bates’ poem in song brings flashes of that glorious giant of nature to even the most seriously tone-challenged listener.

    Thanks, Jeff.

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